I was a student at Awahono School in Greymouth and this is where I shared my learning.
Hi Taylor, Haylee here I like your invention. It looks amazing it's colourful and bright. Maybe next time you could come and see my blog. From Haylee
Hi Taylor, Annabelle here. I like how you made you own dessert. Next time you could use more things about your dessert. From Annabelle.
Hi Taylor I liked your invention but maybe next time can descibe it more.
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Hi Taylor, Haylee here I like your invention. It looks amazing it's colourful and bright. Maybe next time you could come and see my blog. From Haylee
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor, Annabelle here. I like how you made you own dessert. Next time you could use more things about your dessert. From Annabelle.
ReplyDeleteHi Taylor I liked your invention but maybe next time can descibe it more.
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